Hmm! I liked it!
Actually, I thought this was pretty darned funny! Overall, the story was very cute, and though the scenes were pretty predictable, I thought this flash was very kind-hearted and silly.
A few gripes. The animation was a bit stiff at times, yet fluid at others.. but you're probably still working on finding what kind of style fits you best. The character animation was a bit choppy, and the art was a bit grimey-looking.. For instance, them driving in the car was mostly a fugly-looking tween and a moving background that looked sort-of like vomit. Nothing against you.. but You might want to match a tween with a tween instead of trying to mix frame by frame with a non-moving graphic.
Finally, the voices got a bit confusing because of the dense accent. At least, in the first scene, when our main man says "what did I do to deserve this?" I had no clue what he had said, and missed the the punchline the first time I watched. Her angry reaction pieced together what he had said, but you get my point. Make sure the Voices are really clear, especially with the punchline!