Short ?
It's better to long and boring
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Khris responds:
thanks
Uhh
I found it pretty funny. Loved the gun point to head part. So yeah pretty good. :]
Okay
This was kinda funny... but the animation lacked a little...
Hmmm.
I think this is one of those movies that is better shown in Machinima, though I have to say, that the quality of script, the voice acting and the comedy all needs some work. By far the best part of this was the Grunt at the end of it. Unexpected and sudden. Thats probably the only tip I can offer to improve your writing.
Though if you just did this off the bat without any planning then I suppose its okay for starters. Graphics were fairly okay too.
My advice to viewers? Watch if you are easily amused.
That is all.
Khris responds:
thanks for the input dude, worked more on the graphics
lol
It was fairly funny, you could have made it longer, with more of a point. I liked the Grunt, literally, at the end, however.