Reviews for Tywo At Large Ep. #2

[azumitaiko]

Nice

I liked it, but it's not something I'd rewatch, you know? I mean, the random bits made me smile, but nothing more. It wasn't very interesting in some places. The added humor didn't make it any less boring. Also, I found it odd that the man's voice was really low, while the sound effects and Tywo's voice were heard at a higher tone. I had to increase the volume to hear him, but then the other sounds were too loud, so that was annoying..
But, I still liked it. It wasn't a waste of time at all. In fact, I learned a few things, too, which I'm sure was the point of this flash.

Pixmintro responds:

It would have been funnier, but it was a school project, I had to have that boring sciencey stuff in it. Thanks for the advice.

[HeavyTank]

Good...

....but not half as good as the first one.....
1.Why didn't you put any colours except the starting scene?
2.There is no meaning at all....
3.This could be the opening sequence of TaL ep.#3 (maybe it is...)
4.As number 3 suggests, it is too short..
l hope that #4 will be better than this...

[RRC]

Pixmintro responds:

This is episode #2, my commentary explains the reason why its black-and-white is because its meant to mimic old 1950s educational films. The reason it appears to have no meaning towards the series is because it was a porject I did for my Chemistry class last year and I thought it would be a good tide-over until the third. The third episode comes out in September and the fourth episode will possibly be done for the 2008 General Election is November (Its a politcal satire episode).

P.S. The reason why its short is because it was all done in about a week.

[phantomlassuk]

Vast improvement

This is a treat better sequel then number 1.

Graphics.8/10 This is where this movie hits it off the black and white, is just perfect. It made somehow the charctors more funnie,r and better looking it was like a old education lession.

Sound 9/10 Again this improved because of the hilarious voices you used for the teacher the screams from Tywo made. This is good as it all goes wrong.

Humor7/10 Funny as Tywo did all the wrong things the bird falling out of the tree. The teacher voice it was a spoof i liked the lesson.

This is so much better as i love the black and white, look the humor more funny and Tywo more clerer now. Its getting better as it, more detailed .

Overeall a good sequel improves on the first.

review request club

[Bezman]

I'm still looking forward to #3.

Another great animation, but this one didn't seem as good as #1.5.

My main beef was with the fact that whilst the first toon sorta hinted at a larger one, this doesn't really say anything about Tywo, seeming like it's not really 'canon'. That one seemed more like a glimpse into a series with working logic and I was eager to see future work. Here, there was no explanation for Tywo being part of the presentation and I didn't really get a feel for any of the characters, nor feeling that this is a 1951 production.

Also, the jokes largely seemed to all revolve around Tywo being scared or hurt (with a bit more predictibility) and the pace didn't seem as fast, with the last joke seeming like it was being dragged out following all the same, predictable, standard twists.

I liked the bird dropping but add more stuff to keep the promising standard of #1.5

I liked the pun 'jumping to conclusions'.

The intro is great - faster than we can take in, meaning there's stuff to see on subsequent watches, kinda like the futurama intro. I'm looking forward to seeing the episodes the intro shows. Have you already made future episodes? Seems insanely well organised.

-Review Request Club-

Pixmintro responds:

Thanks, it wasn't canon because it was just some fast movie I whipped up in a few days for a Chemistry class, the reason it takes place back then was that I originally wanted to have a color wrap-around at the end where Tywo is reaming Jackal for looking for summer jobs in other time periods (Jackal's the genius). I never got around to it though.

[ZIGGOO]

first pne was much better

this one was to eh meloncoly?

Pixmintro responds:

This was just kind of something to tide everybody over between movies. :)