Fix Lag
Well you could fix the lag, its quite annoying
it didnt seem that you could even shoot the orbs, but maybe find a different method of hittest considering how fast health depleted when an enemy just past through you
making the target not go by a motion guide nor keep moving even if your in the way of it
also instruction within the flash and within maybe the authors comments
Poor
So, the basic premise (which you don't even bother to write in your description): Bounce around, shoot glowy orbs, advance levels (which doesn't seem to improve anything). From what I can gather, the character is an arthritic grandmother with no previous experience of a shotgun, due to the fact it takes forever to fire two rounds and a lifetime to reload. Consider adding different targets, enhance the rate/damage of the shotgun, possibly add health and/or shotgun powerups. Oh, and please, an option to change the music or turn it off. Good song, but ten thousand iterations of the same song ends up grating on the senses.
Captain Hesperus
Ummm WhAT?
IM A HARDCORE GAMER NOT A SISSY!!!!!!
Oh god,
Seriously. You don't put in any instructions, don't mention what the objective is, the balls of light aren't killed by the shotgun, the bullets go through them, the screen change is annoying at best, it takes insane amounts of time to load (on a Core DUo 1.8GHz 1.5GB RAM laptop) and the loading screen looks odd.
The minigame was alright, probably better than the actual game.
But not enough to warrant a star.
There's your advice.
God bless :)
Best game ever
All my 5's are belong to this, This is the shit man thanks for making such a great game.