Reviews for 2 - The Story of Khale

[animatorcjreid]

nice

Firstly i can't help but feel this would be better as episode 1 as an intro to the world of Khale and it seems just like an opening sequence for an episode as nothing much happens of any consequence. I know alot does actually happen but you have set yourself up where the audience are expecting commercial animation quality. The animation is good but at some parts the shorcuts are too obvious. The enviornment and backgrounds are your strong point. They really bring it all together. Lovely rich backgrounds. Overall an enjoyable bit of flash to watch. Nicely done.

[aerosmith1]

wow

gees man that was AMAZING. There wasn't much of a story but it didn't need one. the animation was off the hook. that is the best i have ever seen. you are definitely going on my fav author. keep these coming :)

[Dean-Dobbs]

Entertaining but not very informing...

I've been waiting for this 'series' to unravel for a while now and I'm still not very sure what in the world it is about. I know the Khale character is supposed to become some almost evil force but this second installment doesn't really explain anything and you're not even sure what is going on or what the point in this episode is. I found this aspect slightly annoying but it only affected my scoring for this when it ended on the completely inappropriate line 'School Is Bullshit', I mean c'mon, why? I may be missing some underlining message about him calling school 'bullshit' as some foreshadowing of what is to come but over than that, it just seems like a session of Random events that result in a flying tree?
However, the animation is of extremely high quality and the music is certainly refreshing and very appropriate for the spring season ;)

LeafWorthy responds:

Thanks for the 'review'. The line is "this is exactly 2 years before I realize that school is bullshit, that it's not about me, it's about them and what they can get from me". I'm not sure if you went to highschool, but I sure did, and it was a LOT different than middle school for me. Honestly, if you DIDNT have a messed up time in highschool at some point, if you didn't at least question what the authorities were cramming down your throat, then the problem here is not my animation. Thank you for the compliments, but if the statement "school is bullshit" doesn't do it for you, you might not want to watch the rest of the series.

[Sickboy313]

Splendid

Very refreshing !!!!!
cant wait to see more!! ^^

[favorites123]

nice

WOWLY MOLY! thats the sort of stuff thats meant to be on pay tv! great job! im tired so im to slack to wright a big review! but when i say great job, i mean GREAT JOB! pleeeeeeaassseeee.... mack more! you could even make episodes and sell them! i would buy heaps!