Well done
Not too long, while hitting all the points. The animation was well done and the style, though ever so present on Newgrounds, was still fresh. My only qualm about this flash was the voice. Not the voice acting, that was good. It was the actual voice, especially at the beginning; the sharpness and fluctations of it was less than enjoyable. So, perhaps for a future piece, get someone else to read out a script done by you?
Other than that it was very good. Make more!