ten for a first timer
there isnt much to say, as others have said it already. Its a great piece for a first-time.
Dont let the tens fool you though, or let the 6,7s and other lows dishearten you either! Keep it at, work on the line-art and some of your movements and you'll do good! And dont think doing them fast is good, some people take months to do them, even years, to finish a flash. Dont rush, and you'll only get better! :D