Great job
I came here expecting to blam some more things, but this was just great. I thought the short story was very well written and it was nice to have the music to go along with it. Great job. :-)
Reviews for "TheBrokenAndTheBeatenFull"
DestinedForDisaster responds:
Thank you, I wasn't really expecting people to like a story inside the portal so i'm a bit surprised. But it seems as though newgrounds doesn't have a place for flash stories. Hopefully i can inspire a change.
beautiful and yet so sad...
That was most touching and saddest story I ever heard before... It made me cry :'(
DestinedForDisaster responds:
I am so glad you liked it.
Great work
finnaly got to read the enitre thing haha ive been waiting to see it haha, really enjoyed it the music went great with it also. keep up your story writeing hope to see more sometime =] once it said she had the sharp pain i thought you killed Elly...or you did and i just read wrong but i was like noo you killed her lol.
great work with the writing.
DestinedForDisaster responds:
It may not be as obvious as i thought, But yes she did die at the end, He shot her. But i didn't want it to be all tragic so the ending was somewhat peaceful.
Good story
It's a good story, but since it isn't a movie or a game I'd suggest that there must be somewhere else you can put it to really get the feedback you need to make it better.
Very good!
Beatiful some what tragic and sad ending. Keep up your work.