Great job
I came here expecting to blam some more things, but this was just great. I thought the short story was very well written and it was nice to have the music to go along with it. Great job. :-)
Reviews for "TheBrokenAndTheBeatenFull"
DestinedForDisaster responds:
Thank you, I wasn't really expecting people to like a story inside the portal so i'm a bit surprised. But it seems as though newgrounds doesn't have a place for flash stories. Hopefully i can inspire a change.
Depressing...
I wasn't ready to read all the way but I did... Well I expected something more then just blank reading...
I hate to be rude....
While I'm sure that your story is nice and all, I somehow don't feel that Newgrounds is the place to put it. There are any number of fiction websites out there, I suggest placing your story on one of those.