um... you lost me
Gotta admit, awesome animation and very cool coordination with the sounds and such, but I totally lost all feel and sympathy at the sappy peace song. I think if you continued like you did the intro and kept it on the same path, meaning in that Iraq fight, then, at least I think, it would provide a much more effective realization of the point you're trying to make. Remember, sometimes just showing their reactions, without words, can be much better than whoever was singing that song. Just my opinion, I hope it helps.