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Reviews for "The Anger of Animation 3"
KobraEditing responds:
thanks
Eh...
It was good but I could be so much better, use more programs more tools give teh sticks some weapons!
Pritty much just do more!
err it's ok thought it was a bit boring but hey
fine work bit boring maybe spice it up a bit next time?
What I've waited for...
Unfortunately didn't deliver what I had expected. Here goes the review:
Graphics/Animation: 8.5
For some reason it didn't seem as if the animating in this episode was as good as the animating in the original or second installment. It ran smooth for the most part, but the problem was the texts were a little choppy in the browsers. There isn't really much to say here since everything from the past two episodes applies here.
Audio: 9
You couldn't really go downhill from the past two since your sound effects are actually really well made. Every sound effect is dead on the action where they need to be, so I have no complaints. Again, there isn't so much of a demand for music in a flash work like this, so there's nothing you could really do when it comes to installing music. Nice work here.
Originality: 5
This one didn't feel as unique as the past episode did to me. Personally I found it somewhat predictable. I'm not trying to make you feel like shit on this one, but definitely not what I was expecting. When I said in past reviews I'm looking for something unique - I mean you really have to dig deep to find something the audience is looking for.
Story: 6
This is a hard category to score high in for a flash style like this, but you've made 3 episodes, therefore it's become basically a storyline. The two stick animations meet inside the computer database, but where did the other stick come from? Why didn't they meet in the Blam Cemetary? I'm not saying you NEEDED this type of backstory, but it would have been somewhat nice since this flash was much shorter than the others. Then the battle wasn't nearly as epic as the past couple of battles. It was fairly...unexciting because of the predicatability factor. Why would you try and use Youtube? It was never truly understood in the flash. Hopefully you'll come out with another to redeem the loss of story from this one.
Overall: 8/10
I wasn't trying to tear apart your storyline ability because look at me, no flashes submitted. But at the same time I've reviewed enough movies to know what an audience will enjoy and what they won't - so hopefully you'll understand my criticisms. You have good talent, but the storyline here was truly lacking, and I personally felt it was too short - almost rushed. Use your talent, you have a lot of it. I'm looking forward to what you come out with in the future.
KobraEditing responds:
I'm actually surprised you didn't like this one as much...obviously I remember your past reviews. I didn't really get what you meant about, "where did the other stick come from?" I mean...there were two of them...that's it. Both of them from the past installments. I also found it funny what you said towards originality because I moved WAY away from AvA for this one...I didn't even think of it during the creation process and I tried to make everything that happened(aside from the setting) different. Actually, for setting I had the blam world and computer void so...I'm just surprised you didn't like it more. Also, not that it is much of a factor, I put more work into this than the other two. The reason I say it isn't a factor is because my Kingdom Hearts animations took even more than these and didn't get me near as much recognition. Thanks for the review
nice
I think Part 2 was better, but still, great job. I liked the end when they were cut in Paint