not bad
this was pretty good
Reviews for "The Hardware Store"
Great
Absolutely great, I myself am an Al-Aholic and love this song. Concept was pretty good as was the animation but the lip syncing could be a little better. Not that I could do any better of course ;-)
Lythero responds:
it's the second time I've tried lipsyncing. No doubt there's room for plenty of improvement.
I think it's cause I try to hard and it ends up looking a little jumbled up with too many different word-mouthings xD
Thanks for the review 8]
very good, but heres a hint if you wan't to redo
on youtube someone posted a hareware video like yours, though it's machina, you could get a few hints for this if you should ever wish to redo it;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rwh1MW g1LLA
P.s. as most people said before me, the list bit that you cut was the best bit, ow well :)
Pretty good
I love Weird Al, and I enjoyed your interpretation of this song. Unfortunately, I couldn't help but compare it to the version already on this site, and yours falls short of what I was expecting after having seen that. I don't know the url, but it's in the Weird Al collection. You could take some pointers from the creator of that one. Plus, as everyone else has said, you didn't use the whole song, though you wouldn't really notice unless you'd heard it before (it was smoothly cut, I say). xD
Lythero responds:
"(it was smoothly cut, I say)"
HA. I'm glad you noticed. I spent longer trying to get the sound edited right than you'd think. Cause I had the full song imported, then I lost the mp3 file, and had to download it again to edit out the last verse, but the start timing was DIFFERENT (god damnit). So what you hear is actually one song, then another overlapped right at the start, and then there's the cut of course.
I saw the WoW machinima one years ago and I think that was the reason I tried to make this too. Anyways. I know it ain't that great and it's been done before. I'll make up for it next time ^^;
Edited?
You didn't bother to do the whole song? What is up with that? That's the only thing that's preventing me from giving you a perfect 10.