"Please insert coin for better review"
I know this is your first flash but, I really don't think you should've of posted this video on newgrounds. It was way to informational if you know what I mean. It was well put together ,and I hope you got a good grade on this project. If you ever make anymore flashes I'll be glad to review them for you just PM me and let me know!
P.S. The credits your name wasn't on the screen!