Heh!
Ei paha ekaks flashiks!! :D Kyl se siitä!
Heh!
Ei paha ekaks flashiks!! :D Kyl se siitä!
very good!
Lovely
not bad
not bad, realy good effort. as you first atempt the animation you turned out is very good for your first go and with practice your animation with comeon leaps and bounds.
also a tip for in futer, try making the scenes longer especialy were wrighitng is consernd, you need to leave it visasble long enough for people to read it
well done keep practicing.
I will use voiceacting from now on. Thanks for the tips.
Well...
A bit short, but still kinda funny. You have potential, man. Art is fine, though it probably could be better. The biggest problem with this animation is that it isn't very smooth, so work on that a bit. For your first flash, this was very good. Just keep practicing and improving. Don't give up, man.
I didn't spend a lot of time doing this so artwork isn't very smooth. Thanks for your advice
I liked it
It showed effort, especially for a first flash. you could tyr voice acting, instead of just text, and maybey make future submissions longer. if it was a minute longer, i would have given it a 9. COLOR!!!!! =10