lol
while it was loading i looked at the background picture and i was immediaetly eager to watch this.
the animation was great
sadly because its a WIP, it wont get a great score by me. i would refrain from submiting WIPs because it just looks ugly when it suddenly goes to crappy aniamtion and half drawn/coloured characters etc.
you should have posted a blog post and put in in there or something.
but im looking forward for the FINAL peice!
wow!
Super job, I really look foreward to the real deal.
Amazing...
The artwork, fbf, and shading was done so well, I didn't care it was a work in progress, or another v.s flash. Hurry up and finish this for us okay?
I likes what I sees!
I can't wait for this one to be finished... looks like it'll be great for sure! Great looking artwork in this too
Loads of Promise!
I liked it. Great direction and nice animation and colours. I loved how the music went with what's going on.
You do know there's an 'alphas' section on Newgrounds though right? Where you can submit WIPs and get critique? I think that'd be best suited for stuff like this.
The low score's due to it being incomplete, don't take it too harshly!