Plain
For one, that's a pretty small screen size... I thinkyour art and animation are okay, what would make this film better though is taking the time to draw an actual person rather than stick figures and making it in general, longer.
Reviews for "The Damned Original Short"
Well...
...I would finish something before I post it, otherwise it would be a waste of time to watch it. I offer that as constructive criticism.
I have to say
I was unable to watch this flash, what I was able to see it had some great features. But make sure that your flash is coded correctly, it killed right after the Where....Where am I. Maybe it is just me, but it crashed. It looked good. Maybe resubmit it?
Are you sure you made this?
Because a person who types like that usually cant animate like this.
shmeh
Sorry, WAY too much buildup. It looks like you actually have some talent, though, so next time, actually work on something other then an intro...no offense.