seven
it was cool i understood the story before reading your comment it was original and clever you might want to make a full movie even if it does use tweens and stick figures i think if it was as good as this and had subliminal messages and stuff it could ezily be voted five it doesent have to have vilance to be a good flash you did good hope to see more
Hmmm
I really didn't mind this too much. The storyline was actually pretty cool and unique.
Criticism: I know you stated that you don't want people giving you a zero for it being a stick figure animation. I didn't. But you did lose points because of it. If you have the imagination and the will to work hard for three days to come up with this, what's to stop you for working semi-hard for thiry days? I'd like to think of this work as a teaser. I really hope that you'll expand not only your storyline, but also your creativity in the times to come! Good work!
whatever
Even though the flash was kinda confusing and seemed to have no actual moral the ending statement brought it all together and made me understand it. I believe this flash should be kept.
Aside from general practice...
I only have one piece of advice: Quit whining. The appeal to pity does not hold up very well at Newgrounds. But for someone your age, you aren't that bad at what you're trying to do.
Blew my mind
That totally blew my mind! I'm glad you have found a constructive way to vent your anger at the world. Now I'm off to more of your wonderful works to rate them as well!