Definitely Cool.
It was cool for sure, You should definitely make it longer, Not that I have a problem with how long it is now, I could just see it keep going and going! Anyway, You certainly have a great idea and I really didn't expect this to be anything like it was. My personal favorite was the dude at the end holding the gun toward the camera. The grimace on his face lets you know HE AIN'T FUCKING AROUND!.... Looking forward to seeing more.