"Good", a few nicks tho
I thought it was very good and thought out, the music was good too, but 1. Some of the stuff was cut of the screen and i was not able to read it 2. Most of the reading was fast paced and lots of the dialog i missed 3. You could work on your flash a bit more it wasent the worst but i liked the music and it was good. Thats the way we get by :).
Yeah - the text thing was something I did on purpose too. I did get a little impatient with this I admit so yeah; maybe next time I'll get it right.
Thanks for the review.
Superb in it's own respect
Of course, lots of the outlines were jagged, and that clock looked awful, but overall this submission was very good. It matched the music perfectly, included humor, style, and kept up the mood. Then there's the MAJOR shift and everything becomes super serious. Man, I laughed at first when he was in the neuse. Anyhow, that was the only thing that threw me off. Nice work.
Originally I was going to go with a happy-go-lucky ending and everything in it was done badly (on purpose I may add). In the end with this though; I thought there was no happy ending; he had to die - kind of made the whole thing feel more human in a way.
Anyway; thanks for the review!
well...
Wasn't bad man, but needed more, storyline was good, and to a good song, but the animation quality could've been better. Put a little more time into that and it will be sweet. Over all not a bad flash, good job
Thanks for the review fella. The animation was done that way because:
1) The main character seemed like he was losing his head; that's why it was all wonky.
2) It looked cool at the time; and
3) I'm chronically lazy
Pretty nice
I can see you tried pretty hard, but the movements were a little jerky, and the colors were almost non existent throughout the video.
Actually; I didn't try at all! lol! I got pretty fed up of this pretty quickly!
Thanks for your review; appreciate it.
this ..
this is so fuckin true !
lol - I hope people don't hang themselves just on a whim!
Thanks for the review.