School Project?
You said it. It was for school. Why upload it on newgrounds? Also, add a "play button" at the start.
School Project?
You said it. It was for school. Why upload it on newgrounds? Also, add a "play button" at the start.
To be showcased.
Still pretty good
The animation's jokes weren't tailored for a general audience, since they make references to individuals who aren't well-known, but I still found humor in the punchline. Because of that good final impression, I decided to give the animation a decent score. Good way to approach the problem of including a larger audience.
Thank you, this was submitted sheerly to be seen on an overhead projector.
"...not really for newgrounds" yep your right
This flash video was garbage. The jokes were lame. I bet even if I did understand your quote "inside jokes" they would be even less funny than they already are. You used a computer voice which brings it down personally. The animation was crappy and the voices didn't even sync well. Next time, actually spend more than a few days on a lackluster flash video than this sewage.
I understand your gripes about it, but it was made in one sitting. It wasn't made for a general audience. I think your review is a bit harsh, and I'm sorry you cannot understand satire. Next time you're criticizing a flash, I hope you contemplate that you, yourself have no flash. On a side note, the voices are not synced at all, purposefully, when you have a 1-day time limit, you do not take every detail to mind, or even care. Plus, how am I supposed to take any of your criticizing seriously if you have absolutely atrocious grammar?