Great work!
This was an amazing animation, but here are two things you should know:
1: If it's about Shadow, use Shadow.
2: The spelling had flaws at numerous points throughout the animation.
But apart from that, perfect!
Reviews for "Wrath ofShadow ep. 6.2"
Shi-Gu responds:
Hey, the misspelings is something Ip'm trying to do my best but I really use shadow, but he didn't appeared this episodes, he appears in so much before this and he will have his own episodes later
cool
but wheres shadow
Shi-Gu responds:
Doing his stuff, don't worry, next episodes will be dedicated just to him
Very well done!
But the text speech ran too long on the before they did anything. Besides that it was a very nice flash.
Shi-Gu responds:
Thanks
Shadow
Where did Shadow go
It was just alright.
While it is apparent that you spent time creating this movie, it's also apparent that you could have spent a little more. It's unpolished and there are quite a few things that could be improved to make it more enjoyable to watch.
-Sprite Animation
-Spelling (this is a big one, there were tons of spelling errors)
-Use punctuation! It makes text-based dialogue a lot more interesting.
-Storyline
As far as the storyline portion, you need to let us know a little bit more about what's going on. One of the characters said something to the effect of "I cleansed it in someway" and that was just too vague. If everything happens just "somehow", it's a lot less creative and a lot less interesting. Another instance where this happened was when Zero forced Okiname (sp?) out of his body. Just expand on those ideas a bit so we know what's going on.
Technical Issues:
The 'Play All' button does not work.
Putting in scrollable text (using buttons or, perhaps, the spacebar?) would add to the continuity a lot since the viewer could read the text at his or her own pace.
Shi-Gu responds:
Well, I will try to put in prectice all that you said and I will repair everything I can