Graphics aside
it looks like an okk series. But what's up with that file size? I'd suggest compressing your audio files more, because 7mb is way too much for what's basically a stick figure movie.
Kudos on your submission. I hope it gets saved.
Reviews for "Steve and Jerry Episode 1"
EternalStutter responds:
the reason for the file size, is cuz they are converted from wmv (for my youtube page) to swf (for newgrounds) i guess the file size also converted over :P
ahha
haha...
i liked the cat in the microwave...
and thats so like me not to go to an interview...
ouch..
EternalStutter responds:
haha...the jerry is exactly how i used to be lol
Okay
The styles presented here both in terms of humour and animation go hand in hand, well done on that. Although animating quality and refinement could have been extended.
Very nice effort tho, looking forward seeing improvement in the next one.
EternalStutter responds:
and they will no doubt be improved in the next one :P
Meh
The sound quality is actually good for an animation like that, but the visuals need to be fine-tuned. If a sloppy look was being attempted you hit it. But, I would recommend making it a neater sloppy look. I know it sounds stupid, but clean up the vid and work on your overall look an you're okay. The content was fine and the end was funny.
EternalStutter responds:
neater "'sloppy" look. i actually like the sounds of that..make it LOOK cheap without BEING cheap :P
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noting speciel
EternalStutter responds:
learn how to write before insulting me k? thx