Not lol worthy
The drawings in this were pretty good, but that's pretty much all it had going for it. First off, the humor. It was a bit funny at first, but just turned to pure boredom after the first 10 seconds. The conversations between characters lasted way too long, and would work better as short, simplistic jokes, instead of long conversations that take up a good deal of the flash. The bad humor makes the conversations yet more boring.
The animation was also terrible. Seriously, work on your lip syncing. I sat through the whole flash, just wondering if anyone noticed this same problem. There really isn't that much animation other than the mouths of the characters, taking up the entire flash with long, meaningless conversations.
The story was hard to understand, and the bad humor and animation only made it worse. I don't know who these people are, or if the people they meet are just random interactions or things that will affect them later in the story. Anyway, story = bad.
Overall, this was just sort of childish and crappy. The humor and animation need to seriously be worked on, and it's not as if the drawings are supremely high-quality.