It got something
A little slow action , the background afcourse.
But good idea and nice humor there :)
It got something
A little slow action , the background afcourse.
But good idea and nice humor there :)
Trees and a rock
it was a little slow, which can be alright if put some tolerable music. but yours wasn't.
good thing the fx were really loud.
But the one thing I would change is the background, it was some trees and a rock.
A solid color or an abstract shape would serve as a better enviroment for some costumed eggs that say heart-shape's and pur.
I suck at backgrounds, but i'll try harder next time.
Yeah, about the music, i actually used a wrong track, but i got lazy and didn't fix it.
Thanks for the crits.
cute but...
Cute but not much oomph, ya know? Not a whole lot of point, not terribly funny. You dont have to have black humor to be funny.
Also, the sound they make when they move is kinda hard on the ears.
okay, so...
that kind of totally sucked but i voted you a 5 anyway because i want you to keep trying because this is a great fuckin concept. eggs. who knew. also, that spatula looks like a fly swatter. it is a spatula, right? because, you know, eggs. spatula. makes sense. seriously, though, this could turn into something super funny.
You know, it was a flyswatter, actually. xD
Good
Short, but quite good.
I never really thought about it, but now that you mention it, NG really do need some more white humor, most off the flash in here are black.
NICE work