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Reviews for "Xent - Love"

Great

A little too emo for me, but I loved the animation style.

Beautiful

That was a great animation there. You said you had trouble with the paper, but I think the quality of the toon made up for that. Keep up the good work, and good luck on getting that tablet!

I don't really get the story but...

it was fine, the animations where good and the sound was really going with the story.
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Uh huh....

I can see what you were trying to do, sorta. I believe I speak for many people when I say develop the plot more. If I were you I wouldn't try to follow the song, but rather have the song follow you. The animation itself was great, but lacked a real plot. When that phone rang you shoulda focused on that or maybe delete that whole scene all together. And the rose didn't make much sense either. Basically you need to think your whole idea over. I beat you could make fantastic flashes, but you might need some help in order to do that. Before I forget, the title is called love right? I don't really understand why. I would suggest getting one of your friends to look at it before you submit another flash. I'm not criticizing, I am trying to explain what I think would help.

Nice animation, shame about the song

The animation was nice and I understood the meaning before I read your explanation, which is a credit. But I thought the music was nothing special, dreary even, so overall mark suffered.