Ha, that is awfull
My first review was erased even though it did not abuse the rules so here it is in a better tone ( if all you moderators can find actual abuses to erase). This was not good the animation was just terrible. A helpful hint would be to actually think of a story or idea, write out a story board, then take time to make an animation that is pleasing to the eyes. Then it would get a good score and you can tell you friends that you actually made a good flash out of all of those awful "animations". (this is to be read in a calm voice so you do not think i am just yelling at them, ok moderators)