Reviews for RWD: 010 Mario12

[Scooble]

Need's something...

It's not terrible, there were just two things that bothered me.

- Sonic never steals mario's hat or fights him - that cake's a lie.

- It needed a plotline, or maybe some text, I think you get the picture.

I might be sounding overly judgemental, but I felt this piece had the potential to be really out there and bizarre, but I didn't know enough about what was going on to really get in to it.

I mean the artwork was really different, and mario's walking animation was smooth, but it seems like that was it.

Also, if was a little more varied artwork-wise, it probably could have stood better on it's own.

But I think you get the picture, I'm not trying to say "THIS SUCKS!!" or anything non-productive in my review.

Just try to make it longer, or do a little extra to make it shine out more.

Best luck to your future endeavors,

- Scooble

[pieguy876]

nice

I love your art but you should try to have more of a plot next time but it was still good.

[Jarts]

flannel underpants

Not much of a point except to show off your drawings which weren't very good anyways. The only things I liked was the color scheme and the tiny walking animation,
but the nice colors don't make up for the lack of detail in the backgrounds.

havvvvvvvve a nice day.

[RamJam07]

THE MUSIC STOPPED BUT IT DIDN'T...

yes I actually watched it that long....

[warsman]

uhhhhhh

I liked the music too but it was a pece of crud :(