cool
good animation and good potential for a series.
You need to work on the quality of your recording/dubbing
Reviews for "ShortShakespeare- Othello"
Timsplosion responds:
Yeh, I've fixed the quality now.
Hmm Okay
It didn't really make a whole lot of sense, I know I've read it and seen it because I had to at school, but I still don't get a whole lot of the plot, maybe it's just missing some of the more important details out. The graphics and animation aren't too bad, they could do with a bit of work in parts but mostly decent. As for the sound, it seems a little poor quality and the voice acting could do with a little more work.
On a whole, the idea might be nice but I don't really think it has come out in this too well, some more feeling in the voice acting and a few more details in the main story might actually improve this. I can get over some of the details in the animation and graphics though, lol, those aren't really as important as they are pretty much okay here.
2/5
<3
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Timsplosion responds:
Well, not actually having read the play myself, and having decoded it from the Reduced Shakespeare Company's Othello rap, this was basically the story of it, and I thought it went pretty well, cos I've had one or two reviews saying how good the summary of the story is, so meh, you win some you lose some.
I don't really do these to let people base stuff of off, and I miss out all the subplots and characters that the story can function without, it's just a "cut-the-crap summary", for those who really can't be f#cked to read it and find out all the other stuff in it. Like me.
Well, thanks for the review. I'm still working on getting my animation better, so yeh, keep your eyes open for stuff I make in the future.
Well..
The idea was good and also funny but the sounds were really awful
Timsplosion responds:
Sound's now fixed.
1 Star
Story Line ~ +4
Audio and Voices ~ -2
Graphics & Detail ~ -1
Total = 1 Star
The story line was pretty good.... but the audio, voices, graphics and detail is another story.
Still great work I will rate it a 2!
Timsplosion responds:
2's a down vote. :(
does not deserve stars
You obviously didn't read the play, because even I didn't read it, and I know that was shit. Iago didn't even die. And Othello wasn't black.
Timsplosion responds:
So hold on, you've never read it properly either, and you critise me for not reading it? "Othello wasn't black". You know less about it than I do. My English teacher says that Othello's black, and when I saw the Reduced Shakespeare Company last week, they said that the part of Othello was written for a black person.
Get your facts right before posting. Also, see Mr Cooel's reveiw.