Effort made
Which is nice to see in a first flash, that's kinda what counts for me.
It's not too impressive however, all a lil blocky and the walking is kind of off.
But you've made an effort and if this is what you can produce on your first real go then I'm sure you've got huge potential to improve. The sound was also nice, fitted pretty well.
Good luck.
Hokay
Animation was pretty terrible, and the music, not bad in the beginning but oh my, later on is terrible.
Best part was the preloader.
Keep working, but hey, you have potential.
Decent for your first...
It was ok for your first, I actually just started like 4 days ago with flash and my 1st one didnt make it through judgement but my 2nd one did. So congrats on making your 1st one get through judgement :)
Other than that, not bad, coulda had some more to it, or like... made the grime on the teeth not just a copy and pasted image, otherwise good job hope to see some better ones later on!
you gotta start somewhere i guess, im a newb at it still
not a movie, just a looping animation...
a movie has a begining, middle, and end, this is just an animation being looped, and not a very good one, but i guess we all have to start somewhere...
I dont remember ever saying it was a movie... its a animation and a short one, you cant expect soemthing to be something its not.
not so bad
the loop is just pointless :) but a nice start tbh...