Nice voices :D
I liked the animation, and the voices! But the failing of this movie is the same as with most good animators. Horrible story/not well written. Its a boring shitty cliche typical 14 year old watching YTV plot. Same with the music/sound kinda boring cliche garbage.
Good news! Its not your fault. Animation is WAY to much work to do on your own and you will excell at what you LOVE. So obviously when it comes to animation and perhaps voice acting, you are happy to be there. What you should try and do is find a writer to team up with and maybe a music guy too. This is pretty awesome and it made front page so keep em coming.
I can't really critisize you since most of my animations are garbage even compared to this lol but I will critisize you anyways in hopes that your awesome talent will compliment the awesome talents of others and start producings some amazing stuff! Even if you don't, keep it up and I'm glad that you are animating on NG's :)