I can't stand...
when authors tell their viewers to "be nice." It agitates me, making me more critical. Why have nice when you can have honest? If you're fishing for compliments this isn't the place for it. You expose yourself to countless amounts of strangers, at best you'll get honesty. It's all opinion. My opinion is that you could do better than this. It was drab, and a little sluggish. I think you could build on this and make it really good.