Not bad at all
Pretty good job. But first of all, the thing that got stuck, it should be more than a white dot.
And that took you a month to complete? Seems a bit too long.
Reviews for "Gears"
cool little short.
I liked it! It was a little too short though, butt your art is good with flash and it was pretty entertaining for me since im completely bored right now XD
Keep up the good work.
Needs just a bit more
The animation was fine, but, as people have said, as a story it was a bit brief. What would have made it much better would have been to have shown a more gradual deterioration in the robot before it blew up. Bits coming off, steam coming out - that sort of thing - build up the tension before it blows. Of course, that'd take you another month! Good luck with your next one.
Develop the idea
It looked nice and clean, the idea was well presented that they were gears... the robot part didn't do anything for the story... for all i cared it could have been a printing press.
Meh...
That was really short! Sure every thing flowed smoothly but it was just generally boring. Even if your next one will be 4x longer it will still be really short