Nice
Looks good.
Reviews for "Paladin's Quest Trailer"
Bravo for your first Flash!!!
I'll just state this to clear it up. I have read the story that this Flash is based off of and I know for a fact it has nothing to do with the other "Paladin" series. It's based off of the Yugioh creatures. No it's not some stupid card thing we're gonna see again. It's the actual creatures living out their own lives, which sounds pretty cool when you think about it.
The voice was a little loud, but I'm not gonna discredit you for that because this technically is your first Flash submission that really means something. You were just precautious is all. The voice could go a little deeper, but from looking at The Paladin Of White Dragon card it actually fits quite a bit. In the picture, the creature looks rather young and might have a little bit higher of a tone.
I liked the music choice at the end. Simple, yet very effective. In all honesty, I got goosebumps. NOT KIDDING!!!
Bottom line, you deserve a good score. It needs work, so I'll skip on the 10...sorry! Of course, I happen to know the work you poured in to the book version itself. Not to mention, trying to fit it all together as a Flash too. Hard work pays off and for a first Flash, I don't think you can expect that much better than this. Good artwork too! Adios! *poof*
Good
I agree with some of the others below you kind of need to work on the voice parts a bit but other than that it looks interesting. Can't wait to see the actual flash.
sbigmang23 responds:
Thank you! I'll make damn sure it won't disappoint.
pretty ok
Like your artwork. Not a lot of animation, but this is just a trailer, hey?
Your voice acting needs a LOT of work. You probably want to use Audacity or some other sound editing program to make your voice sound a little better. Sounds... like a whiny kid trying to be dramatic, doesn't do it for me.
Like your soundtrack, though.
not so loud...
kinda wanna see the flash... but your voice over is WAY too loud.. i had to turn my comp down so i could understand you... then i couldnt hear the background noises... so shhhhh thanks!