it was anazing i guess i cry lots
i cryed in coil and i cryed here you should go check it out if you made this you should understand other than some of the other assholes here>
Reviews for "The Pen is Mightier..."
I liked it
It was very symbolic. I was expecting crap when the movies started and it just evolved...
AWESOME
"The pen is mightier than the sword"
-Jose Rizal (Philippines' National hero)
bullet?
the behavior of a bullet is a little too linear and monotonous to make pretty in an animation, and i don't think you quite made the cut this time. i'm pretty numb to symbolism, so this is really the only criticism i can make. the scratchy stick figures at the beginning and the end kept things varied enough. otherwise, it is decent work.
from a non-critical stance, i would like to say that i believe art is what you do. when art is anything but that, when art is something that has to be discovered from the materials and from the artist, you find yourself with much less of it. maybe that makes what art exists something special, but it also causes the grey dullards who do not, so much, desire to compose to become little dreary slaves to the quality world of the artist and the critic.
Wow!
That was great! Graphics were great (obviously), but let me add that the animation had one quirk... When the bullet went into color and there was filmy white stuff on the back of the bullet. It looked too sticky, and I'm guessing it was smoke or something, or some kind of gaseous effect. If it was, there should have been some more particles being clipped off of it, or just dissipating from the sides as well.
Sound was great, well done, good quality, but it started off a little slow. A lot of people are going to close out of it before it reaches the end because of it. Seriously, the beginning IS BORING. I guess that's the point though.
Lastly, the concept was pretty original. I loved it! You did a great job with it!