keep up the good work
starscream is still cutest of all decepticons
Reviews for "SRM Transformers 2!"
Battosai810 responds:
I can't disagree there.
cool
grimlock strongest grimlock grammar not so strong
Battosai810 responds:
Grimlock love new buddy!
Nice work.
The most scene I liked here was when Grimlock bites Brawl down. That's gotta be a lot of damage!
Battosai810 responds:
Had to have a fight scene in there somewhere.
A definite improvement.
This was definitely a whole lot better than the first episode. This was largely thanks to the inclusion of subtitles, which meant I was able to follow what was going on. Another reason is the improvement in humour, as this time I found a few jokes funny as opposed to just the one. Seeing one of the transformers actually transform was nice to see and this was something that was missing the first time round.
There also seemed to have a bit more of a storyline to it this time round, although the plot definitely wasn't one of this movie's strengths. Since this is a series perhaps you could bring in some sort of ongoing storyline/s instead of just having the entire episodes based around a fight. The introduction of a new character seemed to be a good thing to base a storyline upon, but you didn't really seem to do anything with it.
Unfortunately the movie still didn't really appeal to my tastes as, just like the first episode, it was far too silly. I was also a little disappointed that the characters hadn't been upgraded graphically. Although the newly created backgrounds in this episode seemed to be a little better than the older ones.
Battosai810 responds:
First of all, thanks for all the constructive criticisms. Normally it's just "this was good lololol" or "this sucks, and by extension, so do you."
I really listened to what viewers said the first time around and implemented subtitles and actual transforming Transformers. I was still a fairly inexperienced animator at the time, but it was a big step forward to actually animate them.
Plot isn't something I really focused on in the first two SRM Transformers flashes. They were just two little projects I wanted to put out that happened to blossom into a fairly successful series. However, if you watch the original Transformers, it was all about showing off the new toys (in a literal sense as well as metaphorical) and having the robots fight each other, as opposed to creating a strong story to focus the cartoon around. I have made much more effort into making stories in the third and fourth parts of this series, so watch those if you wish.
Sorry the flash didn't appeal to you. I don't see anything wrong with being "far too silly" as it's intended to be a comedy. As for graphical updates, I don't update every time I make a new flash. That's ludicrous. I don't think you'll find many people on Newgrounds that do that, or at least not people who make series-based flashes. Watch Homestar Runner - there have been half a dozen graphical upgrades since that series began, and it started close to a decade ago.
Sorry you didn't like it - give my other flashes a chance if you will. Thanks for writing a lengthy review, but frankly I made this flash a pretty long time ago so some of your criticisms have been addressed already.
i dont know why,
but i can't help but like mini-starsceam yelling WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
that simply makes my day. thank you for makeing something awesome
Battosai810 responds:
Hey, I've got two more installments planned out as of this review's writing, so keep your eyes peeled for more awesome.
Also, I think Mini-Starscream's scream would make a kickass ringtone.