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Reviews for "LOZOOT "Stop and listen""

Great

This was a good movie in my opinion. I can see you have a lot of talent with drawing and animating, cause everything looked great. Also, I think you have a good voice for the voice-acting. The dekutree really sounded like an old man and Navi like a little girl (I can hardly imagine this was done by the same guy).

The only big complaint that I have is, like everyone else pretty much said already, it´s hard to hear what the great deku tree is saying. I could understand most of the words the second time I was listening, but I had to listen very very carefully. Subtitles would deffinatly be nice.

I also think the ending of the movie could have been done a bit better. I thought there was still gonna be one good joke, but then the screen turned white and that was it. Just make that final shot a few frames shorter and perhaps make it slowly fade away. You know how to do that right? Just add a big, black or white square in the upper layer and put the alpha on 0%. Then create a shape tween and make it go to 100%. It´s just a small detail, but it looks a lot nicer in my opinion.

Overall 8 out of 10, 4 out of 5. To be honest I´m a little suprised that this movie got through with a score of only 2.69. I guess that is mainly because of the conversation that was so diffecult to follow. I think if you had added subtitles, it could easily get a 3.00+ score. It might even be award material. Anyways, I do hope that you´re gonna make another one. Like I said, you deffinatly have a lot of talent when it comes to making flash movies. Keep up the good work.

~Auz

Axxe17 responds:

eyah im so fresh to this program, so really i would love some help on it^^; thankyou very much for the advice, and hahah yeah that was really me doing navi, i was using some kind of voice changer, but only a pinch

Nice but.,.

Nice but I miss the subtitles, only understood a few words of Deku Tree lol

Axxe17 responds:

yeah next time i should really do that, the program i used to do the voices was kinda hard to change the volumes on

I'm not a Zelda fan...

But I did enjoy this! The animation was great, well done!

Hm...

Damn that Deku tree got mad...how rude.

lol awesome!

Great job! I wasn't sure how good it would be when I saw the title screen, but once it got started, the artwork and animation was pretty impressive. Hilarious timing and dialogue too.