better to present it when it's finished
it seemed incomplete, it's missing a story and we can't seem to tell which character is who, and hard to tell if this is a trailer or a video that isn't finished. it's better to show this to people when it's done, since it doesn't really have a story plot in it
pretty cool
pretty cool, i look forward to seeing your future projects
it was good
i got really confused, the woman walks as far away from the floorswabber as possible? and the end i think you should have faded it out or something because
just seeing some alien in the last frame and then it goes back to first frame is annoying i want to know what it was or attleast make it less confusing
Well...
Normally, I dont look at expiremental flash. I mean, I give it it's props, it does produce some great stuff. However, I am going to assume you drew those pictures in the beginning, and worship you. Lord knows I could never pull such coloration or detail. Kudos.
Good, but not great.
The artwork was the big thing about it. The animations could have been a bit more smoother. The story seems a bit vague and it looks as if it's just jumping from scene to scene at random. If you make more just try to polish it up a tad more. Other then that it's good.