Funny!
Lol it was very well written as far as plot and jokes went. The dialogue seemed natural. The voice acting showed talent, though one can only have so many voices. I really appreciated the mix between comic book and flash style, and it's nice to see something that looks like it coulda been on Adult Swim on newgrounds :P
If you could get more people on board (just to create more variety and better differentiate between the voices) that would make this a 10/10 for me :)