This is Pretty Good
Man.. this is a Good Flash.. Its been a long while I did not see some flash's like that.. I love the Story.. i can't wait to see the rest of it Because you added lots of info and thats good. We can understand the story pretty well and i think you taked a little bit of naruto story buf you changed it.. Like when the black sonic talks to the Bad sonic about killing is brother.. its like that the black sonik would be sasuke.. But anyway. I loved the Spacebar for the talking because it let me time to read all the lines And the Battle was Pretty good :P Nice Power. And God you got a Perv woman in the Team thats nice XD .. Keep Up The Good Work Man You got a Style that i never seens but i want to see mores of this So. Dont Give Up on This.