story
three things you need
1.Story- Every famous NG celebrity has storylines even the somewhat mediocre and bd ones do too. its what makes a movie a movie.
2.Style- you need to create a environment for you movie wether it be FBF or tweens .
3. Characters- no movie no mater how bad has characters. and scripts would be great.
but this doesn't have any so it will most likely get another turd of the week.
"famous NG celebrity" lol
"environment for you movie" lol
"characters... and scripts" lol
Why?
Okay, first of all, please stop, I'm sure your not a bad person or anything, but this stuff your doing, it just isn't good, and its pissing people off, a lot. I'm not saying you should give up flash, if you think that you have some sort of calling, then go ahead and make something, but actually work on it. The average flash film (meaning something with a score under a 3.00) takes about 3-10 days to complete. Secondly, stop treating others like a jerk. I mean, sure, maybe JokskornerStudios01 isn't a flash god or anything, but how dare you insult him with no ground to stand on. And I apologize but it is a statement of fact that overall he is a more popular artist then you are all things considered, and while this one in particular seems that maybe some time may have gone into making it, the majority of your work lacks... effort. Lastly, a Turd of the Week is a bad thing, it is a symbol that out of the many people who submitted their work during the week and were not blammed, yours had the least quality. To be honest, I have seen many things that have been blammed that are better then "Let's Have A Party". Now before you go and dismiss my entire comment with some little one line comment, more then likely telling me what I already know, that I have only submitted a single cartoon, and it was blammed, please take knowledge that I know this, I invite others to know this, its not secret information. However when I submitted my movie, and it was blammed, I learned that to have a successful animation on newgrounds, I had to work for it, and so I am. In other words, I learned my lesson, why can't you at least try to learn yours? To wrap it all up I'd like to say that unlike many other people on the site, I don't hate you, although I do hate your usage of the word "faggot", personally I think that word is just about as ugly as another word that starts with an N and goes on to be spelled in a way much along the lines of tigger. I do think people get a little more angry at you then they should, but I'd like to say something, you think you can get away with some of the stuff your doing just because your 13. well you know what, I'm 14, and I have Attention Deficit Disorder, but I still know when enough is enough.
"Okay, first of all, please stop, I'm sure your not a bad person or anything, but this stuff your doing, it just isn't good, and its pissing people off, a lot."
lol
"I'm 14, and I have Attention Deficit Disorder"
lol
Tisk Tisk Tisk.
Well, another phailing flash atemp. Do you exactly know why this flash got a 1.42? An average flash gets al least a 2.00+.
You reale, REALY, need to start working on your flashes. Do that, or don't come to Newgrounds at al. You hardly worked at all in this. Don't say "I did work on this and lots of people loved it." Because from the recnt reviews, 8/9 of everyone here hated it with a passion. This could've been good, but guess what. No.
(To Viewtuful_Chris) P.S., 95.9% of newgrounds hate you.
you know why i don't put effort into these
because in a hundred years nobody will give a damn
Just one after the other.
A few of my reviews that I have written for your useless contributions have been deleted but maybe I can hold back a little on this one.
Why don't you actually put some work into your "Flash" and not give newgrounds pointless, pathetic, lazy movies.
I know I don't have anything that I have put onto newgrounds but it's because I know I can't make something that should be good enough to be viewed by many people and enjoyed because I don't have the time to put alot of work into anything right now.
All that I ask is please delete everything you have on NG right now and put alot of work into an actual flash then submit that....because turd of the week is nothing to be proud of.
No.
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i finally know what you are, your on newgrounds to do nothnig else but spam. your a spam liitle kid, i mean god, you couldnt call this a flash even if krinkles helped you!, and i bet you dont even know who he is, and btw, your trail version of flash is almost over, ...i hope, and if it isnt, you have just got it of some website for free, everyone knows how to do it so dont consider yourself clever, its illegal you fook tard