Good concept and nice artwork
Like the title says, you did good on the artwork. The idea of the game is good too. Unfortunately, it's hard to understand the plot or what anyone is saying because of all of the Engrish cases. Don't worry, though. I got the general idea. One more thing you might want to change is the fact that unfinished words will be sliced in half and continue to the next line. This makes it unreadable to most people. It would really help if you took the whole word and put it in the next line to prevent this. Thank you.