We interrupt this review
Cuz that ws weird, but crazy dude, lol. Just make it longer.
We interrupt this review
Cuz that ws weird, but crazy dude, lol. Just make it longer.
Yep. Yep, yep yep yep.
Not good...
Audio was way too loud... especially since it was comprised of nothing but the annoying sounds of someone just blabbing away with their mouth. The lip-synching for the sounds was really "off" feeling. You could tell there wasn't much work put into them. The intermission thing was not as funny as you obviously thought it was, I assure you. And the icing on the cake was when, at the end, you used the term "most simplest", which breaks rules of the English language I remember learning in elementary school. It makes you as bad as that group "Syndrome of a Downs" with the song in which they intone as the chorus: "the most lonliest day of my life". Nothing personal ('cause I don't know you from Adam), but this was just bad.
no good
not good, it makes no sense,and it was poorly animated
Not so great
first it's not original drawing it's just an alteration to a part in another film second It ain't so funny and third it isn't really much of a flash kinda of a Strawberryclock-ish film if you ask me but that's just my opinion. Don't give up on your dreams on my opinion go make some rough sketchs from your own hands and then try and make a flash worthy of Newgrounds. Now Go Get 'EM!
At least it is constructive criticism. Really.
good job
stealing that picture from Joe cartoon.