*tear*
*sigh*
one thing i didn't like was the sudden switch from day to night, I personally found it somewhat jarring...
I loved the way you used the music, I thought the sudden two note strings in the beginning (the house and everything) were rather harsh, but i understand that you used it to show us how harsh the sun was on everything.
Overall, that was really good, the length of it suited me, but i was wondering, why is the surviving flower silvery blue colour? represent water?