Reviews for Black Sundown

[IceDragon64]

interesting, skilful

Very good art, good animation. Good sound and music.

It would, of course be much better with voices. It is difficult to follow the story through only sub-titles, especially since the punctuation is not that clear, which makes it difficult to follow and the right hand side fades to dark so the words dissappear.
I didn't entirely follow the story, I think you have it clear in your head, as you explained in the notes, but we should not need the notes to understand it.
For example, the idea of the General and this vengeance arrives from nowhere at the end of the story.
I think you need to work with some more people who DON'T know what is going on as beta testers before submitting.
Its good work. Work on it. I look forward to the sequel

Kumar responds:

yeah it is another thing I'm working on hopefully for the next episode it can go a little slower pace and of course voice acting to add extra animation to it less tweens. That way the vengeance plot will go noticed from frame one.

[Andreino]

good work

Well, I think you did well; the plot was interesting and the graphics rather good (maybe a little bit simple).
Nice try!
P.s. hope to see soon a ep. 2

Kumar responds:

Well I was looking to revampt the graphics from the original so it is a huge step up but I just wanted to get this one out of the way so I can begin with a much interesting approach hope next time I do not dispoint you so.

[BobisFilch]

dude....

some stick figure flashes are ok.
this one aint cool though

[RPGamer]

AWESOME

YEAH this is cool, I liked it a lot, not lying. All the waiting wasn't in vain, NOW make the second episode, you must you must

5/5
10/10

Kumar responds:

Always good to read a good review looking forward to making episode 2. I'm guessing people want to know what happened to the agents and exacly what the heck is going on here. I can't give you a time frame but working on the sequel I have a general idea so I can introduce the infamous General Reiken and Shin-Rei and of course if the plot can be showned rather than explained.