Wow!!
Very cool!! The drawing style is a little bit like some cartoons I've seen on another website, but of course I can't mention it in a review. ='[
Umm.. Don't think theres much room for improvement. There was a bit near the end where a guy evaporates, and the guy next to him screams - the guys mouth has an extra line (You'll see what I mean!).
But apart form that tiny insignificant detail, it's all GOOD! =D