You put effort into this.
I have to say, good job!
Pros
Easy viewing
colorful animation
decent storyline
cons
Seemed too...drab
It did make me laugh when the clock threw the knife at the donut thief :)
overall
8/10
DECENT SCORE!
Reviews for "When Breakfast Goes Bad"
funny.
love breakfast at 2 PM. and it is so true you can never find anything to eat.
GutairPick responds:
Tis' true, tis' true.
Mildly interesting
The animation ran smoothly and it is mildly funny, you had a good idea but i think it would have been twice as funny if you added more sound e.g. the sound of the clock wailing in pain when he hurt himself instead of just having musi in the background. I enjoyed the movie, but i found it slightly boring.
GutairPick responds:
I thought about putting in sound, but it would've had to of been really loud to be heard over the music, and turning the music down so you could hear the sounds better would have made the parts where no sound was needed really awkward and dull, so I left it out.
I like it..
I see you put some efford on making this and I believe you can get much better. Looking forward to your next submission.
Now i'm going to bed. It's almost 4 am. Mwahaha.