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Reviews for "[tribute]my Own Wanted 5"

Good effort.

This movie had very nice music that fits into the fight scenes, which is very good. Good sound effects too.

However, there are a number of things you can work on:
-The straps on his bag that he's carrying had the same color as his body. So it looks a bit like he has four arms of something.
-When the main character got shot, on the top-left corner there was a bubble and inside it were weapons switching. I just didn't get that.
-When he was climbing up the building after the building got blasted and got a big hole. You should have changed the color inside the hole and added a few details to make it seem like the inside of a building.
-Try to use thinner lines for the face and the diamond(anything small and with lots of detail really), otherwise if the lines are too thick it's unrealistic and a little unclear.

Overall it was above average. You've got the feel of an action movie, you just need to improve the art and the animation a bit.

Hope my review helped.

cashleycool responds:

Errr... Ok, your review helped so erm.. Dead?

Not perfect

I like it. Good music, and sound, quite good animation. Mke more of stick movies )

cashleycool responds:

Ok thanks! And "Make" is isn't "mke" And the smile is this==> :)

But, :) and =D

a bit booring

I thought it was a bit booring... he killed them so easy. no action and so.. but anyway. kinda good.. it isn`t easy making stick but if you not born for it .. dont try it either. but keep up the good work

cashleycool responds:

You bitch! Fuck you.