hmmm....not bad
i'm not saying it's bad or anything but i lke the amount of effort you put in. I'm sure Oscar ould appreciate it at least. Well done. Boted 5 but not rated 10
Reviews for "[tribute]my Own Wanted 5"
cashleycool responds:
Thanks dude! I'm now making My Own Wanted 6! I just need a training from a pro stick animator! =D ( I guess)
Not perfect
I like it. Good music, and sound, quite good animation. Mke more of stick movies )
cashleycool responds:
Ok thanks! And "Make" is isn't "mke" And the smile is this==> :)
But, :) and =D
Good effort.
This movie had very nice music that fits into the fight scenes, which is very good. Good sound effects too.
However, there are a number of things you can work on:
-The straps on his bag that he's carrying had the same color as his body. So it looks a bit like he has four arms of something.
-When the main character got shot, on the top-left corner there was a bubble and inside it were weapons switching. I just didn't get that.
-When he was climbing up the building after the building got blasted and got a big hole. You should have changed the color inside the hole and added a few details to make it seem like the inside of a building.
-Try to use thinner lines for the face and the diamond(anything small and with lots of detail really), otherwise if the lines are too thick it's unrealistic and a little unclear.
Overall it was above average. You've got the feel of an action movie, you just need to improve the art and the animation a bit.
Hope my review helped.
cashleycool responds:
Errr... Ok, your review helped so erm.. Dead?
Hmmm...
Okay, here's my review!
PROS :
+ Great Sound Effect (SFX) - Different sound for each weapon
+ Nice camera FX - Like the style of the game XIII
+ Weapon are drawn perfectly - Additional highlight really bring it up
SUX
- Try to be more realistic, a couple of bullet cant push ppl head off!
- HUGE bullet hole (Fired with a gun, not SHOTGUN)
- At the scene of the guy looking at the jewel, his leg dont stick to his body, lol
- While he's on the roof (The wall blocked his leg), PLS at least make his body go
up & down to make it loo more real.
- PLS improve ur drawing, this could be better wif better drawing
- Gun dont need to RELOAD?!
- Credit, the credit font are too big & not properly arranged, pls be more thankful
to the ppl who help u wif this, even the puniest assistance.
- File size are TOO BIG!
PS : Good work, need more improvement & do make the letter wif capitals
like "My Own Wanted 5"
cashleycool responds:
thanks..i'll try to do better
Cool
It was a little confusing to the eyes at times but overall it was good...and it had good music.
cashleycool responds:
oh..okay..