Great fast paced action.
The action was fast paced, clean and well done.
However, there is one HUGE drawback!
The dialogue is way too slow, slowing down the pace of the movie and kills the viewers interest in finishing watching the entire thing.
If you can speed that up, the movie would likely get an even higher score.
Thank you for your review, ive already taken using Voices as talking instead of text and you are right.
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Typical sprite movie. Here's two things I think you could change to make it better
- speed up the text or add voices instead, more time seemed to be spent on waiting for the text than there was actual animation
- zoom up on the characters and decrease the total area of the background
Thanks ill take your advice and use my own voice to use up all the characters it kinda bugged me as well with the text.
ok ill try new points of view with zooming in when they either walk in or something, thanks for your review.
I havn't done a review in a long time...
But I figured you might want some advice on how to improve it.
Well 1st off, when people are talking, it's better to do it word by word, rather than by letter. People don't read like they're sounding out the words. =/
Try to use different moves and flash effects, and remember that as long as the animation is smooth and easy to follow, faster is better, unless you're using dramatic effects that need to be better focused on. Sound was fine. And using more than 1 setting is always a plus. Probably the thing that bugged the most was the speed of the movie, and how slow the people were talking. Good luck though. ^.^
thanks for your Review now that im seeing what i didnt do to well i see how i can improve, ok so its either word by word or voice clips ^_^
thank you and ill be sure to make it even better next time!