Not bad.
It could really use some faster animation and word sequencing though.
For what its worth though, nice flash, you just need to work a little harder on it is all.
Reviews for "Replica's Story Pt.1"
LeoK responds:
thx, i actually had been planning this flash since i beat kingdom hearts CoM, which was a couple of years ago..
not my cuppa tea
but some people might like it so ill give it a too so it can pass jugement!
LeoK responds:
THX!!
my oppinion
i never played chain of memorys so i cant tell whats going on at first i toguth u made this up but i read other reviews and it sounds real. i agree with the others and give it a diff. name i had no idea what this was based on the title. give it a kh label or something. the timing of the frams was eally slow and just remmebr to watc ur vids befor u post them . it really helps. like 10x beofr u post to catch any flaws
LeoK responds:
thanks, i'll take that into consideration
You should take more time on it.
The characters were badly cut out, there was white around the outside of them, this could be corrected by carefull zoomed in work. This was especially apparent when Namine came in, there was a vast area that was blank, this only shows me that your work was lazy and unproductive, you should take more time and correct this.
LeoK responds:
I tried, the magic wand thingy must've done that is there any way to correct it, because i really want to do a good job even if it takes a couple of weeks!
ah not the best
The story was just so slow and so boering, i watched for bout a mintue and stopped. maybee you could get viewers to watch it all of it if you make the characters talk. So far as it being bout kingdom hearts thats alright
LeoK responds:
so what, do you want me to do a voice-over?